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RagDoll
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 08, 2005 4:44:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

That was so lovely. It gave me chills.
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 08, 2005 5:32:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ohh!!! thx!!!!!
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Asterik



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PostPosted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 9:38:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, this is going to be written right now. I'm better at writing on the spot, so... here goes.

How do I express me,
In a way for others?
They say that to define
is to place limits.

I want no limit!
I want to be who I am,
Wild and free!
Can't they tell?

When can they see
that in my drawings
of dragons, birds, animals,
that most have wings to escape?

When will they spy
the natural beauty
in the pictures taken
not only for beauty
but for natural freedom?

Let the lone flowers
grow between stone -
an act of defiance.

Let a lone burst of colour
make the dullness of eternity
all the more bearable.

Let me be who I am,
Let one be undefinable,
Let one be free,
Let others see the beauty of
the natural things around us.

The beauty of a blooming flower,
The beauty of a child being hugged
and the little miracles that happen
every single day.

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Faerie



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PostPosted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 2:19:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

That was good, Asterik!!

I wrote this one a while ago:

Insanity

I'm at the brink of insanity
I'm on the edge of my mind
The voices tell me to jump
But I doubt they would be so kind
To tell me it's just not worth it
I want justice for this crime

As I contemplate letting myself go
It's not that difficult
Now I finally know
I'm no longer at the brink of insanity
What was once my solace is now my foe
My mistakes I have learned to rewind
And although my healing is slow
Hopefully I'll never fall off the edge of my mind
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Hey you, out there beyond the wall,
Breaking bottles in the hall,
Can you help me?
Hey you, don't tell me there's no hope at all
Together we stand, divided we fall.
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Asterik



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PostPosted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 2:25:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yummy! Lurve it, Faerie!

One of my older ones:

FEATHERS FLIGHT AND FREEDOM

When you look up to the sky
and see a raven flitting by,
is the first thought in your mind
of Feathers, Flight and Freedom?

When your feet are on the ground
You see terror all around.
You would be all safe and sound
with Feathers, Flight and Freedom.

If I could change just one thing,
If I could make the world take wing,
Everyone would rejoice and sing
of Feathers, Flight and Freedom.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 2:28:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oooh, that one gave me chills, Asterik!!
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Can you help me?
Hey you, out there beyond the wall,
Breaking bottles in the hall,
Can you help me?
Hey you, don't tell me there's no hope at all
Together we stand, divided we fall.
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Asterik



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PostPosted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 2:31:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

X3 *hugs* Chilly!

Me love positive feedback.
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JaceBrown



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PostPosted: Fri Jan 06, 2006 9:35:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not a poet but I feel lame cuz I have nothing to write... I'll write something on the spot later...

Aight here it is....



It Burns (Through your eyes)

It burns,
Through your eyes.
Your hatred. I,
I can see it. Its,
Its no longer a secret.
A secret, A secret,
You couldn't keep it.
The only thing worse,
Now in your hearse,
We see...
It,
Burning through your eyes.

Vain. Vain,
Your death was in Vain.
The carpet, your body stain.

What is left to see.
The spectacle you made,
as your body laid,
Solemn across the floor.


Why, they asked, why...
I replied... I... I replied...


"It burned through her eyes..."


FIN.




What's a good poem without murder?
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 4:15:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

RagDoll wrote:
Well.. I think I am going to post my poetry one at a time.

This is about my current relationship. I wrote it when I was very confused about everything. It was one of those situations where I had to either make myself happy or everyone else. Some of the things in the poem are just between him and I, so if there are some things you question... it's ok!

Romeo and Juliet

Your smile captivates my soul.
Everytime you're near, I get a feeling I can't control.
Even though we have no blessing, see
I too, think it's meant to be.
Talking with you for hours on end
Gives me a feeling I can't comprehend.
I know this may sound strange,
And I know this is a sudden change,
But my feelings become deeper every night.
My hear even grows more fond when you're out of sight.
We have talked of how we're linked...
Or maybe it's just black and pink.
Be my Romeo and I'll be your Juliet.
Just promise me you won't forget
That my heart cries out for you.
But I'm left knowing not what to do.
I feel so torn inside,
About what could be wrong, but feels so right.
And what's right doesn't feel so.
Being this torn makes me feel so low.
You've rescued me from my fear of being alone,
And just like a stupid girl, I decide to let go.
But I still feel it's not too late.
What am I waiting for? There's no need to hesitate.
Just jump back into his arms of embrace.
Please don't be afraid to face
The fear that keeps me from him.
He has become my sweetest sin.
If it's wrong for what I had,
Then it feel so good being bad.
I need his help to face the fear.
Please, kiss me once more, my dear.

The first part of it.. I am talking to him. 10 lines from the bottom.. I start talking to myself, and the last line, I am talking to him again.

If anyone has a little question about a line, let me know.
What do you all think? How about the last one I put on this forum? No one said anything about it.


crud. i am writing a song about jack and sally, and its called 'Romeo and Juliet of the Dead'
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Asterik



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PostPosted: Sat Jan 07, 2006 8:43:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Jacebrown, I loved that! X3 Wonderful!
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JaceBrown



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PostPosted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 5:59:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Really thanks. I wrote it on a Whim... I might do another sometime if I know i have a fan
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 9:51:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*clapclap* You does! (*) ish your fan, she is!
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