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PostPosted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 9:56:15 pm    Post subject: Need someone to read your Fic? Reply with quote

Need somebody to read/critique your fanfiction, give you advice, or just talk to? I'm ready and willing. :3 Just let me know on this here thread, and I'll read your fic and give you desired feedback. :D If you want critiques on your fan art or just need someone to tell you what they think, I'm also here. :3
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 10:11:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

hey can you read mine it's called ,,love for the dead" it's about BoneJangles and a new girl that comes to the Land of the Dead there's a chapter 2
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 11:53:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

my fic is called Keaton

Find it  here 

Enjoy!
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 1:50:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

What do you think of my comic? Links in my Signature.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 7:24:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

in this order, and they're LONG by the way... i don't like writing short stories.

1. "heart of stone" - go figure...
2. "broken hearts"
3. "heart of a wolf" - unfinished as of yet.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 2:24:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alright, I just got back from a weekend camp, so I'll get right on that!

@Sally_ragdoll(/shadow): Great fic. :D I managed to finish it before I left! It was really creative; it was quite refreshing to see something Bonejangles related, seeing as there's not usually too many of those. The only thing is, you used the phrase, "A river of blood" or something like that quite a bit- can you think of any other descriptions for it? :3 Otherwise, grrrreat job. <3


To the rest- I gotta get to yours still. ): But I will asap! Thanks so much for telling me about them!~
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 1:57:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks. I tried to put it in a diffrent way but it just didn't sound very nice. Thanks for reading my fic
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 2:32:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, that happens sometimes. :3

Not a problem!
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 3:11:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well..When I post it, it'll be on fanfiction.net, but when it is, look for "Blue and Pink, not just colors" Under Sonic the Hedgehog.
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 7:15:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mine are the TNBC super Crossover and the Elite Beat Agets New Arrival.
It's supposed to be agents.
I can't find then anywhere. So just check my profile.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 2:21:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

@Pumpkinprincess:

Very nice short story! :D It reminded me of the Twilight Series a tiny bit- the only thing I can say is maybe to add a bit more detail- it was pretty good that way, but there were some things I couldn't quite picture. The pacing was pretty fast too, but it was really great! :3 Keep it up!

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 2:23:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Heart-Of-Stone wrote:
in this order, and they're LONG by the way... i don't like writing short stories.

1. "heart of stone" - go figure...
2. "broken hearts"
3. "heart of a wolf" - unfinished as of yet.


Can you link me at all? Or at least tell me where to find them? Thank you! :3
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 10:55:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i can't upload my new fanfic it's a sequel to loe for the dead
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 2:18:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Jei wrote:
@Pumpkinprincess:

Very nice short story! It reminded me of the Twilight Series a tiny bit- the only thing I can say is maybe to add a bit more detail- it was pretty good that way, but there were some things I couldn't quite picture. The pacing was pretty fast too, but it was really great! :3 Keep it up!

O N.to.THE N E X T[[one.


Thanks, I had originally wanted it to be a little bit longer, but for the contest I entered it in, only 12 pages were allowed. That's why it's a little fast.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 2:42:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pumpkinprincess wrote:
Jei wrote:
@Pumpkinprincess:

Very nice short story! :D It reminded me of the Twilight Series a tiny bit- the only thing I can say is maybe to add a bit more detail- it was pretty good that way, but there were some things I couldn't quite picture. The pacing was pretty fast too, but it was really great! :3 Keep it up!

O N.to.THE N E X T[[one.


Thanks, I had originally wanted it to be a little bit longer, but for the contest I entered it in, only 12 pages were allowed. That's why it's a little fast.


You did REALLY well then! I would have never been able to cut it down at all. xD Did you get results yet?
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 4:00:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Just got the results yesterday.

I

didn't

win.

Oh well, I won't let that stop me from continuing the series.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 5:36:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That's too bad. D: It was so good! ): Still, I look forward to maybe seeing/reading the other parts. :33
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 7:05:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Jei wrote:
Heart-Of-Stone wrote:
in this order, and they're LONG by the way... i don't like writing short stories.

1. "heart of stone" - go figure...
2. "broken hearts"
3. "heart of a wolf" - unfinished as of yet.


Can you link me at all? Or at least tell me where to find them? Thank you! :3


i don't know if there's a search button or not. and no, i can't do that. i'm blocked from the main site. i can't get on it. i don't even know how many pages of fics there are anymore. when i first started out, there were only about maybe 25 pages. i can't tell you.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 7:14:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3867845/1/The_Halloween_Keepers


here is a link if you want to read mine. i couldn't get it to post properly on the main page so i posted it some where else
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 8:01:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Heart-Of-Stone wrote:
Jei wrote:
Heart-Of-Stone wrote:
in this order, and they're LONG by the way... i don't like writing short stories.

1. "heart of stone" - go figure...
2. "broken hearts"
3. "heart of a wolf" - unfinished as of yet.


Can you link me at all? Or at least tell me where to find them? Thank you! :3


i don't know if there's a search button or not. and no, i can't do that. i'm blocked from the main site. i can't get on it. i don't even know how many pages of fics there are anymore. when i first started out, there were only about maybe 25 pages. i can't tell you.


Oh, I'm sorry. D: I'll dig those up, then.

Wow, there's quite a few chapters in the first! *gets to work*
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