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PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 4:28:54 pm    Post subject: Post Your Poetry Here! Reply with quote

It can be about anything, but let's try to stick with NBC theme cause this is a NBC site! Thank you! I'll display some of my poems later on.
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PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 5:22:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

its not NBC related but i thought why not?

In My Room

In my room I am safe
Out in the light I get hurt
If Iím in the room Iím surrounded by darkness
No one can get in
I am alone
If I go outside people will hurt me
I can get stabbed in the back
And thrown on the floor
So I stay in my room
Surrounded by darkness
No one can hurt me
For I am alone

In my room
Darkness surrounds me
No one can hurt me
For i am alone.
Danger lurks outside of the door
Trying to temp me out
But i know better today
And i will not go outside
I will not be hurt again
I wil not go out in the light.
I'll stay in my room
Where darkness surrounds me
Where no one can hurt me
for i am alone


give ur thoughts and anything u think needs changed
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PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 3:17:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's dark. I like it.

Here is one that I wrote not too long ago.

Shadows, Visions, Feelings

In visions of the dark night,
In the shadows, I walk blind.
Blind with no light in my life.

SHADOWS

In the shadows of this horrid fright
The visions I make with my mind
My shadows give me inner strife

VISIONS

In these visions, my fear takes flight.
This leaves me feeling some kind
of monster, who takes me for his morbid wife.

FEELINGS

The feelings I hide are a lonely sight.
I've lost all hope; one day I'll find
My solution with an old, rusty knife.


But yeah, that's it.
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PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 3:21:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Here is a poem I wrote. Its more of a short story, though. I just posted it on fanfiction.net. Its called Symphony of You.


I remember a song
One you played for me at such a young age
Do you know it?
I take it not

I'll tell you
---
It was the year of 2005
You won the Jazz band contest
I was your lead singer
I knew the Jazz
You taught me it
And to think, I wore such a delicacy of an outfit
Pink and indigo pinstripe suit
With a wild sensation style of my hair
So wild it made them all jealous
At one point I thought they wanted me dead

My friend,Eris was the instrumental girl
She played an instrument
I forget what one it was though
Some of your friends were the backup instrumentalist
Players I remember the song
We wrote it together
Before I was sent to the hospital
After taking your bullet of gunpoint
Due to your friend's jealousy of us being together.

But the concert was excellent
There were a few bands there
Yet I remember what I wrote in my diary
I know its something I would never write
And yet you stumbled upon it
You reciting it
Send shivers down my spine
I had intentions of making it a song

Feraro:
Oh curse thy Jupiter's moon, a son in time, a lotus to bloom.
Why do I deny you?
But that question is for the gods
I just want to know
I have no angel, I am my own
Can't you see the similarities
Of my life and some lies
Which are never meant to be said
But yet you find them out anyway
So what's the use?

I hope you hear me
I hope you soar above them all
Regardless of followers and martyrs
Regardless of them all
But I want you to be
Happy
Once like me
I hope your happy in the ending

No heaven can contain you
No hell can hold you
No dream can replace my eyes
For what I see
In my eternity

I heard you singing it as if it were a song
I lit up for a moment
Then I continued it

Pandora:
I hope the darkness doesn't thrive upon my desire
To set the fields of roses on fire
My possession is another's obsession
But my angel
Sorrows will dawn up you
Yes my angel

Feraro:
But you said you were your only angel

Pandora:
But who says you cannot dream?

You threw the book down
I resumed anyway
And you did, too

Feraro:
Can you belong to me?
Can the angels sing once more?
Can all the feelings I feel die?

Pandora:
In your arms
The end of the world is near but it doesn't not matter
For every moment is to shatter

His essence now collided with mine
I could feel his savory hot breath against my neck
I wanted to turn away
No
I didn't
I couldn't
Then the heavens began to command us
And under their orders and by our wills
We joined into a harmony of our own

Feraro and Pandora:
I'll try to promise you this and live from now on
We live to learn as all human kind shall do
But is it such a crime to love you?

We ended as he went to kiss me
The door swung open
And there was our band manager
He had us at gunpoint due to our foolishness of love
I told him to run
But no
He took the dive
But at the last second, I pushed him out of the way
And I was the one who became so close to Death's door

When he arrived at the hospital the following day
He had brought his saxophone
And what he played was my song
My love song for him
And him alone

And what shocked me was
Was that I never kenw that music was as simple as
Just a lone diary entry


What do you think?
I'm writing a second chapter to this. And it has a bit of NBC in it.


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PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 8:45:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

awsome story i loved it, anways i will post a poem i wrote last night.it is freakin awsome and kinda tnbc related but, i have to wait parents are evil and dont belive of me writting poetry.
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PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 8:53:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok here's another one. I have it on my lookup @ neopets.com. ANd yes it is Jack Skellington! YAY!

Summer Wishes

I'll write you a song
If you give me a dance
I'll write you a story
If you give me your inspiration
I'll write you a poem
If you give me a drawing
I'll give you a kiss
If you promise to love me

Simple like the sky
Adoring like the moon
The stars sing out
To your name in June


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PostPosted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 1:22:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I wrote chapter 2 of Symphony of You!
And I show it to you as soon as it appears on fanfic.


Until then,poetry away!

The World You Didn't Know ( this is actually my dream world)

My world had no control...
But when I saw you
It all began to change...

-----------------------------------------------

When I close my eyes

All I feel is you

You led me here now and I m lost

I open my eyes and I see everything in my Will

Paper flowers dot the fields

Waterfalls cascade past my view

All the while, Earth crumbles under my fingers

And the fallen souls of my friends are revived

We are distant from each other

Until one day

One man I like comes riding in a chariot of black

With the horses' mane silver in the waves

I end this wish by asking from me to you

For its all I have

And its what I promise you

-----------------------------------------------

I have nothing else to offer you

As the tides crush my beloved hour

Here is what I do

-----------------------------------------------

I stand upon the mountain of which I saw from a paper's point of view

I'll turn around and try to throw myself off

But I know its no use

Because underneath is the door

The door that no one dared to enter

But do I try?

Of course I do

Its why I have wings in that time

-----------------------------------------------

I never reveal any side of me

Everyone commented my life so scornfully

For I fret if you decide to laugh

-----------------------------------------------

And so I hide it within myself

And fell my heart collapse

And when you come again like you did yesterday

-----------------------------------------------

We'll stand up on the hill

And let our childhoods fly forward

So that the dawn of tomorrow

May catch them

So that they won't fall with the shattered world behind

-----------------------------------------------

I hear you hum something

I know it all too well

-----------------------------------------------

And that's when my heart began to burst

I felt myself begin to jump off like my memories

-----------------------------------------------

That's when you caught me

I was surprised

I thought you wouldn't care

Care if I fell into the cold abyss I used to call my life

But no

Someone proved me wrong

You did

-----------------------------------------------

I'll return to Halloween Town someday

That's what I promised you

And I still keep it

Entitled to my throne as the daughter of a god

One that's now gone with the sands of time

What one says sometimes lies

But do I care about that?

All I care about is you

----

That's what you told me

That's what you said to me

That's what spoke to me

-----------------------------------------------

I'll never forget that day

Just as I won't you

When we stood up on the spiral hill

Just as I am doing now

And when I looked down into the pool of darkness below me

I didn't know what to do

-----------------------------------------------

And is I threw myself off

And landed into you

And when I did you were there

-----------------------------------------------

Its what I learned that night

And I'll never forget that way you saw me in your sight

Your eye sockets

Their dark depths leading me into another world

Letting my spirit fly

And in the end, I receive no denial

Like you to me

Your appearance dazzled me

There was no light

For I was falling into you

And I couldn't jump out

I liked it

You had something no one could touch

Not even I

I asked who you were

And all you told me was

---

"Your world."
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 1:24:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yet again another poem!

Through the Town Hall Window( this is on fanfic)

-They told me to fly all night
Forget about it all and the fight
But did I listen?

Oh no

I was too worried for them all-

The curtains opened in the Town Hall.

No one was around as a few sly shadows moved around. As if they were an invisible they saw everything the girl upon the stage was doing. She took out her ponytail and let her crimson hair flow with the wind.

-Looking out the window on a summer's day
The taste of root beer coming my way
All that mattered to me was his song
Before I knew long it would all be over-

She wore a classy,1800s dress. It shimmered lightly of pure snow white and emerald leaf green. Her eyes of a lone sunset opened. She had given herself confidence as she pulled out a miniature Japanese fan. The only thing she could do now was breathe.

-"Some things are dreams
Unlike you
And yet I wonder if you truly are there
I'll cross that rugged bridge
And die to see you again"-

The shadows now moved down into the stands.

Watching her every movement.

Her voice how crystal clear it was.

Her fox tail now hidden as well as the cat ears.

Her flesh, normal.

-" All you dreamers out there tonight
I've had a heart of my own
Until one day someone grabbed it and broke it before me
And yet I can't resist to cry
Because that heart was as glass as this song!
This is real
Its the way of what we all feel
I should have stayed
Where my heart knew well
I longed to tell about the dreams I once had as a child
Yet I roam and frolic easily
All in the breezy
Ways of my heart"-

"Sora!"

She looked ahead to see no one.

And when she didn't she turned to see him.

Her true Pumpkin King.

And not the actual one, himself.

-"And now all of the darkness
Hear me tonight
I have a lover of my own
Now.."-
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 1:41:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

My other poem(s)!

Why Can't I Breathe?

Its harder than you can think
I don't know how to say
Goodbye
To you-

And as the bravest knight of King Arthur's throne fought bravely throughout the night he knew he would tire soon. But he knew giving in was no option. So as he struggled to fight the vicious beast of chaos, he kept in mind the maiden for whom he fought for. And yet her words echoed in his head, as he felt the fire from heaven drop upon his skull. And as he fell to the darkness he heard her voice sob in the wind, " And to you thy Romeo, the heavens are yours."

Hours later, he woke to the sound of doves, and a song.

-And I'll remember the way you told me to stay
Upon the foreign shores once more
But do I dare to do so?-

He felt the silk underneath him. Red like blood and distant like space and time within its own confinement. As he gazed into the figure across the room, he saw that memory was indeed paying him a visit.

-Kono mai hakkyou yoko
Firing up all the nations for you to see
Wan nao taimu taishite otaku tame ware
Ware soshite otaku
Always?-

As Jack Xavier Felling the X saw the woman he began to realize it was her.
It was the maiden whom he had rescued from Camelot. That wicked place of heart, was a chamber of hell in his mind. But it was strange, the maiden hadn't forgotten him nor his deed of bravery towards her essence. She now sat next to him.

-Remember me?
A little ripple in the water
A little fire in the candle
A little part of you
Falling off of your mind
And into your heart-

" I know who you are,Jack."

" And I, to you too,Sally."

" I know I shouldn't tell you this, but tonight, we are to be burned at the stake."

" What?"

-Think hard now
Don't you see dearest?
You're like a child to me-

They had to escape. And so he promised her in the hour of the royal king's feast they'd runaway.Without being seen.

-You promised me a lie
Of which I couldn't refuse
Not at all-

But when the hour came, it was hell itself before them.

-Not at all-

Guards had their weapons before them.
The king ordered his assaults.
Even the villagers grabbed their torches upon this day.
Night's sweet kiss was only an hour or so away, as something flashed in the mind of the knight. He ignored it, as he grabbed his maiden, and fought.
His running was at a great agility as in the end he reached it.
The borders of his prison.
But it was futile.
For minutes later, he found himself at the stake.

-Don't try to fear me
I did not you
Until that one night
Under the moon-

And there, his last dream tolled its presence in his mind.
It was of him, standing on a base of a spiral hill.
Ahead of him, was a vicious creature.
As he was hypnotized. Being drawn to its lust for blood.
And then, in the end a young girl tackled him off the hill.
Just to save him.

-Not at all-


Led By Darkness Shown By Light

I remember you
I remember what you asked of me
And what to do
---
It was so simple
Yet I could not carry it out
---

But how we met
It was just a simple gamble of life and death
Its the game we all play
The way life is
A roll of the a pair of dice determine the luck we have that day
We have short chances of any good luck
But those who have it
They are unworthy to keep the world
They are rich with money
I don't need it

---
You told me that
The day I came home crying
Then you whispered it into my ear
But even then I still l cried
All cause I knew I was right
That someone did love me
---

All I need is you
Those riches I don't need
I've experienced them in the past
All I want to do is have simplicity
I know no one can capture it.
Can they not?

Maybe I was wrong about that
When you saw me in the graveyard
I was singing my anthem
I'll remember it to my second afterlife

---
You stood atop the tallest grave
And took my hand
And showed me a world
A world of which I've never seen before
---

You know the ocean''s water that collides with the sand
Upon the shores of Italia and more than I could ever possibly learn to dream?
That isn't water
Its my tears
The sand hides my blood
For is not my true home
Its where I died
But it wasn't me
It was someone else
I swear it to you!
And yet I wonder why won't you believe me!

---
You're just like me
You know you do but
Your unsure of who to trust anymore
---

Exactly like me

---
You know why
I know why
We can't trust anyone
Not even our true selves
And guess what Jack?
I cry sometimes
Cause I no
I have to live through the traumatized memory
The suffering of long ago
But when will you learn?
---

Sora had been in Jack's room practically all day at the Skellington Manor.It was a shame. It was a lovely day. The pumpkin sun rose from beyond the graves and yet cast a shadow upon one. It was in the shape of an angel with a blade in its hands. Little did anyone know, that blade could be used as a weapon. Only Sora knew.
For it was her tombstone.
Its antique charm swept a wave of depression over all who walked by it. Especially Sora. For her, it was like a symbol of hell. Risen from the trenches of her weakness and brought up the nightmares she dreamt as a child.
As she now looked out onto the town, she began to ponder if anyone would ever trust her. She began to cry more as she threw herself onto Jack's bed.

" Sora, may I come in?"

" Go away, Jack!"

" Sora!"

He tried to open the door but it wouldn't budge.

" Sora! Please! Let em help you!"

"Never!"

She quickly dashed into his bathroom. She knew what she was doing. She couldn't take it anymore.

---
You didn't hear my tears anymore
For when you went to check on me
All you saw was a girl
Collapsed on the floor
Eyes shut
And hopefully to speak
That is if the darkness would let me.
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What do you think?
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 10:46:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wowzers!!!! O.o

Long (And well written) poems!!
Keep up the good work!!
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 11:32:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you.
Now its your turn to post some. Come on people let's see what you can do in the art of poetry!
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 03, 2005 3:18:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I posted some poetry on the NBC site.
Its up again, yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The last 4 poems are the ones I posted, I think I also posted a different one. And its official, my life is an original Jack and Sally.
There's some guy I know who looks like Jack. I know I'll never get a chance with him.He's everything I'm not. I'm a Sally.
I dunno what to think. I just know my life is a Jack and Sally.

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 03, 2005 2:41:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well.. I think I am going to post my poetry one at a time.

This is about my current relationship. I wrote it when I was very confused about everything. It was one of those situations where I had to either make myself happy or everyone else. Some of the things in the poem are just between him and I, so if there are some things you question... it's ok!

Romeo and Juliet

Your smile captivates my soul.
Everytime you're near, I get a feeling I can't control.
Even though we have no blessing, see
I too, think it's meant to be.
Talking with you for hours on end
Gives me a feeling I can't comprehend.
I know this may sound strange,
And I know this is a sudden change,
But my feelings become deeper every night.
My hear even grows more fond when you're out of sight.
We have talked of how we're linked...
Or maybe it's just black and pink.
Be my Romeo and I'll be your Juliet.
Just promise me you won't forget
That my heart cries out for you.
But I'm left knowing not what to do.
I feel so torn inside,
About what could be wrong, but feels so right.
And what's right doesn't feel so.
Being this torn makes me feel so low.
You've rescued me from my fear of being alone,
And just like a stupid girl, I decide to let go.
But I still feel it's not too late.
What am I waiting for? There's no need to hesitate.
Just jump back into his arms of embrace.
Please don't be afraid to face
The fear that keeps me from him.
He has become my sweetest sin.
If it's wrong for what I had,
Then it feel so good being bad.
I need his help to face the fear.
Please, kiss me once more, my dear.

The first part of it.. I am talking to him. 10 lines from the bottom.. I start talking to myself, and the last line, I am talking to him again.

If anyone has a little question about a line, let me know.
What do you all think? How about the last one I put on this forum? No one said anything about it.
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 04, 2005 1:37:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like both your poems, especially that Romeo & Juliet one. It really brings you out. Keep it up!

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 04, 2005 1:45:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

However.....there is one poem almost no one seems to acknowledge. Scroll down on the fan fiction part of the NBC site until you come across one called Memory of Thy King.
Hope you like!

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 1:28:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

O.o You write alot of poems, I think your'e addicted:

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 03, 2005 4:31:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I haven't written in so long. I think I will today.
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 11:47:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

these are all awesome...i'm not all that great at writing poems like these...
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 5:43:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Here's a poem I wrote after one of my friends attempted suicide, I never planned it or anything I just wrote the emotions from his perspective and it came out like this:

Green fields spread far over distant lands,
I will no longer listen to your demands,
I'm leaving quickly,
Leaving fast,
Leaving so quickly people will gasp.

I will travel alone,
Extremely far,
I will conquer this distant without plane or car,
I will float alone,
Straight into that Heavenly zone,
I will zoom through the air,
Up to the white shores I shall fly.
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 08, 2005 4:04:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is an awsome topic Poetry...I'm an aspiring poet please rate this

I wrote this souly as a thank-you to a guy named Shawn who saved my life without even realizing it...I just wanna thank him right here

I Miss You...

Do you remember
Back that I came in to camp
Not my loud, somewhat happy self
But Teary, Bleary eyed

From crying out To people who don't exist
The prievios night
Asking why he's like this
What did i do

So I stayed after in acting class
And you asked me what was wrong
I told you about my friend
And about his suicide thoughts

You wrapped me in a hug
Like none other
Told me it would be ok
Made me tell his mother

I know you don't know this
But not only did you save my friend's life
You saved mine too
I was so lost and depressed
until I met you

I Miss you so much
When I think about you
My heart shatters
Into 1,000,000 pieces

To small to Put back together
But big enough to cut me
In so many different Places
Trickles of tears with my blood

I miss you Shawn, I miss you

Always & Forever
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